tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4274097411072155257.post6984101002221896188..comments2023-05-07T02:37:46.717-06:00Comments on The Days of Wine & Roses: A Few More Fold-Out Postcard Sonnets - 7/1Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4274097411072155257.post-16287923084156229842010-07-30T06:37:42.308-06:002010-07-30T06:37:42.308-06:00Hi Dave: Thanks--that is very much appreciated.Hi Dave: Thanks--that is very much appreciated.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4274097411072155257.post-87809058625620868832010-07-30T04:20:41.678-06:002010-07-30T04:20:41.678-06:00I've always been a great admirer of sprung rhy...I've always been a great admirer of sprung rhythm well done - and it's deucedly difficult to do well. Don't think I could tackle it, but I'm most impressed with your verses.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4274097411072155257.post-72479934250827642032010-07-28T06:50:43.821-06:002010-07-28T06:50:43.821-06:00Hi Dave: Thanks so much! I like to "spring&q...Hi Dave: Thanks so much! I like to "spring" the rhythm, & I've done this by ear for quite some time (these were written in 1996.) Very gratified that you stopped by & decided to follow!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15687192784861682991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4274097411072155257.post-2104259770252255472010-07-28T05:31:18.151-06:002010-07-28T05:31:18.151-06:00I'm full of admiration for this, particularly ...I'm full of admiration for this, particularly so for the lineation. I would never have thought to break the lines as you have, and if I had thought wouldn't have had the courage. But it works wonderfully well. Brilliant passages like:-<br />"teeth chew them up spit them out just like<br />Wrigley’s Spearmint Well the sky just can’t quit<br />smoking So why’re you so nervous Mr Marlowe"<br />just left me breathless with envy.<br />(Didn't know you could be!) I can't imagine why I have not found this blog before now.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.com