Sunday, August 8, 2010

A Few More Fold-Out Postcard Sonnets - 7/16


A streetlight with scoliosis a
confirmed old bachelor too the night’s
prismatic night sweats are a problem too a con-
firmed old bachelor with a bunch of re-

collections it just can’t shake with a
wheeze like a fire extinguisher wheezing mica a
confirmed old bachelor a trace jaundiced at that the
night’s incontinence is a problem too there

isn’t much sunlight to say the least there
isn’t a Holiday Inn swimming pool glinting blonde to
say the least the fog on Divisadero 12 any-

thing a m thick with soap bubbles in search of a
mouth & Marlowe feels more like a spectroscope
with an astigmatism no less

Jack Hayes
© 2010


Dave King said...

I made a false start on that one. Got the stresses wrong at the first attempt. Completely compelling, though, when I did get it right.

John Hayes said...

Hi Dave: Thanks--re-reading this for the first time in some time it is a bit of an odd one. Thanks for sticking with it!